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I'm Not Okay Chapter Three (Commentary)I'm Not Okay
a/n: look, I don't care when the f Harry Potter is in my version it takes place now. BTW, please come up with some goth books and movies. (There's something called Google. Use it.) If u notice I used some of the gothic bands! PS: NO PREPS.
After dinner Eternity had to get back into a line with the first-years (she was part of them but much older) and Draco and another girl lead them upstairs into the Slytherin dorm. (a/n: in this story Draco and Pansy r cousins.) Eternity got to go to the front of the line to talk to Draco. She plunged her booted feet onto the stone floor and did so until she was at the front of the line. The other girl talking to Draco was had long ebony locks with blue streaks in them. She wore lots of white foundation and black eyeliner. She looked just like the girl in Linkin Park's video for Crawling. (Linkin Park suck ass) (a/n: Eternity looks more like Amy Lee) (No.)
I'm Not Okay Chapter Two (Commentary)I'm Not Okay
The Beautiful People (Because it's so creative to name chapters after song titles)
a/n: if ur a prep, DON'T READ THIS STORY (Well, I'm a rock chick with blue hair from England, how do you do chap?). If you're not please help me out by suggesting some goth bands and movies for me to reference. Thanx.
After the train ride Eternity and the other students got off the train (No shit.) Eternity was shocked. In front of her was a beautiful castle (You're right there) A very tall bearded man asked them to follow him into little boats. (Hell yeah, Hagrid and his little boats bitches) Draco waved good-bye to Eternity and made death's touch sign. (What?) (a/n: if u don't know what that is I suggest u fuck off to a Britney Spears concert or something). (Nahhhhh ) Eternity and the others trooped inside the big castle. (Oh, they trooped in
I'm Not Okay Chapter One (Commentary) Hey everyone, Electricka-Sixx here.
So I decided, since I'm a complete saddo with nothing better to do in my spare time, that I'm going to make commentary on Tara's little friend Raven's Harry Potter fan fic, "I'm Not Okay" I was going to do commentary on the infamous "My Immortal", but I would probably get bored and a lot of people are doing that already.
I'm Not Okay
Chapter One: Helena
a/n: okay I don't own this but whatever.
Fifteen-year-old Eternity Demen'tia Johnson (Dementia Johnson?) warily took a seat on the Hogwarts Express. As she did so, she heard many giggles in the air. Ugh. Stupid preps (So you're a Prep just for simply laughing? Hell, I love laughing, so I must be the biggest Prep evaaarrr) Eternity had hoped she wouldn't see any when she came to Hogwarts. They had made her life in Los Angeles High School miserable. Now she was supposed to put up with them here? (Get over it. Everyone ha
Abandoned ChapelThe parish waits now,
the loneliness of corners
crawling outward on walls--
chipped away by the wind,
and held together
by silk spindles;
cobwebs align them like the membranes of memories,
the cut of a jewel in an broken window
against the sun
where beads of rain
gather in a mesh of strands
a new Mosaic
against the backdrop of a cemetery;
My eyes seek out the sermon
in close proximity,
paint no distance
between headstone and cloud;
elegies topple each other
in their climb to heaven
as light trickles
over the shade,
breathes a new glow over snuffed candles.
I feel the weight in these empty rows,
how a breath couldn't cease to be breath
in the midst of prayer.
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